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We were told that the genre was good; chick flick horror, but the institution identity and idea needed improvement. With the idea, we were told that there was a tension between the synopsis andrelatability of the main character. The audience wouldn't be able to sympathise with a girl just going around killing guys, so we need to work on this aspect of our idea. We decided to have a signature that she left with every death, instead of the collection of moustaches.

Other changes we decided upon were:

• the guy makes a move on her before she kills him
• the opening sequence would be showing her third murder
• the character would develop through her experiences with the men
• it would be the afternoon as opposed to evening
• there would be only a few killings in total
• her signature is a doodle of some kind